Draft of Open Letter

In this blog post I will be providing you with a link to my draft of an open letter.

Reneman. "DRAFT ICON" 2/24/2013. Creative Commons.

HERE is a link to my draft.

I want you to pay attention to the organization of my letter and tell me if it flows well. A lot of times my writing can come off as choppy. Should I move this sentence somewhere else? Should I move a whole paragraph to a different part of the paper? Im worried that the letter might be too formal or not formal enough so look out for that. Obviously look out for grammatical errors but also let me know if the conventions of a letter are met. Thanks.