In this blog post I will go over what I have learned after
doing my paragraph analysis on my QRG.
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| InverseHypercube. "Writing with a Pen". 5/26/2011 |
After looking at my QRG for paragraph analysis I have found
several things that I am doing wrong and several things that I could do better.
After my analysis I have found that I tend to jump straight into the topic
instead of ease my way in. By jumping straight in and straight to the point I exclude
valuable background information that could be very useful for the reader. Jumping
straight to the point like I often do also causes a problem because I cannot
expand on the material as much as I could if I gradually introduced the
information. Another thing that I have found to be doing wrong is redundancy. I
feel as if I am saying the same thing over and over again. It would be
beneficial for me to go back and revise my work to fix these things.
A link to my QRG can be found here.
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